My responses

Response from Peer analysis:

Lauren Hollings did a peer review of the second draft of my Asexuality paper.
Her comments were nice and she gave me some confidence in how I'm doing so far. It was very reassuring. She also reminded me to add photos and color to the text, I can't seem to remember.
Lauren noticed that my conclusion was short and needed to be worked on, which was a fault that I had known about and wondered how apparent it was. I know that I need to fix that.

Response from Professor analysis:
Crystal reviewed my draft after 1000 words and gave me some sound feedback. A reminder that I use 'you' and other personal pronouns often was given. I tried reading through once, but I need to again.
Her question is exactly correct. I must not make it very secure sounding in my paper since she needed to do some guess work. I will make my facts clearer.
My lack of a conclusion was noticed. She goes on to remind me that it's more personal than general and that I might want to save that for reflection.
Another reminder that I was given was of my citations. I need to add the year to them instead of page markers.

Other ideas:.
Some things that I had talked about with people but wasn't found in these two responses were adding a reference page and helpful links to my page. I plan on adding links in a format similar to how the web-text is presented, under categories. The links will have descriptions, as well, describing where they will take you and what you can learn there.

Is it midnight yet? I think I did this in time.